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Grammatical error in the 4th sentence, “…threats to the British liberties they saw as a their birthright.”

The first sentence doesn’t make sense. is it supposed to be Americans had lost confidence in President Adams? They had let him know it.

Typo on third line. Should be “operated in a single state.”

How is the “form it took” a contradiction?

“other thirteen colonies?”‘  What was New England?

The authors try to hard to make it dramatic and make the flashback dates too difficult to follow.

I think that is a typo for crowds

Chopin’s novel is The Awakening, not The Great Awakening.

Take the n off of American.

…seeking land, gold, and titles would sound better I think.

Useful information but it takes an extremely long time to read! There is too much unnecessary details, please shorten it. This goes for every chapter in the book.