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January 21, 2021 at 2:43 pm
Suggestion to change “had” in the first sentence to “have.” Though I know that past-tense is typical of textbooks, changing this sentence to present tense is important as it showcases the continued existence of Native Americans in the United States to present day. Many students of US History are unaware that indigenous communities still exist. Changing the language can highlight the importance of indigenous communities in the present day.
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January 21, 2021 at 1:15 am
hello pickle jeff. become cucumber please
January 20, 2021 at 11:22 am
The first paragraph is confusing. It talks about all the eighteenth century wars, and then in a later paragraph says, “By the eighteenth century, colonial governments discouraged the practice…” Is there a better way to write this so we can delineate the point you’re making?
January 20, 2021 at 3:16 am
The second sentence should say “The revivals of the Second …” instead of “The revivals the Second …”. As it is currently stands, the sentence does not make sense.
January 16, 2021 at 4:36 pm
January 15, 2021 at 3:24 pm
The line the But while the U.S. denounced Japanese aggression, it took no action is misleading. It overlooks the U.S.S. Panay incident and the steel and oil embargo placed on Japan on July 26th 1941. It also overlooks loans and arms sales to China in 1940 and 1941 and the formation of the American Volunteer Group.
January 13, 2021 at 9:45 pm
No, of course not. They were just used as examples of the horror that took place among most of the prior confederate states.
January 13, 2021 at 1:25 pm
All branches of military are to be capitalized.
January 13, 2021 at 1:24 pm
Navy And Military titles are supposed to be capitalized.
January 12, 2021 at 7:44 pm
why is not
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